Talk:Ginwoo

Tribun, this article is pretty opinionated. Can you remove some of that, please? Dungy 16:57, 16 February 2011 (PST)

Ok, what exactly you think I should change?--Tribun 17:02, 16 February 2011 (PST)

"Of course, buying it when the Avatar is next to broke makes this joke worth it." This is merely your opinion on whether or not the joke is funny. It's not really our job to let the readers know if we think something is funny or not. "It of course was a sham", this is also highly opinionated. Even the simple statement, "It was a sham" would be less opinionated. "This is a play at the real-life Ginsu knives, which often are as equally useless as the Ginwoo." We don't really need to have an opinion towards Ginsu knives on the codex. Our opinion towards such knives is really irrelevant. Dungy 17:13, 16 February 2011 (PST)

Better now?--Tribun 17:31, 16 February 2011 (PST)

Much better. Thank you for your edits! Dungy 17:41, 16 February 2011 (PST)