Talk:Material cut from Serpent Isle

Cleanup and Clarity

I don't quite understand the Monitor section, involving the Bane of Wantoness's designed on the animals. I'd clean it up, but risk changing the meaning. Someone who has the facts on hand should. I think the conclusion could stand a second look, too. AngusM 03:54, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Bigger Cities's dejustification

Plot_Cuts_in_Serpent_Isle#Bigger Cities starts off with "This is no plot cut" which screams "this section shouldn't even be here". If that section is no plot cut, then it shouldn't be in the article. If it should be in the article, it should be reworded. AngusM 17:16, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Another option would be to change the article name to include this non-plot-cut that is also a reflection of the reduction to the game for the purposes of meeting a deadline. AngusM 17:30, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Call it Cut Material in Serpent Isle or something like that? That's preferable to removing the info entirely. 76.226.131.142 00:58, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

I like the heading "Cut Material in Serpent Isle" as well then everything mentioned here fits just fine, as well as any other new discoveries that could come to light. Jaesun 20:30, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, let's try renaming it to that.--Sega381 00:56, August 4, 2010 (UTC)

I guess that's preferable, but it still looks a little... inadequate. Maybe there's a game development term; something that would generalize plot, map, dialogue, etc. AngusM 03:17, August 4, 2010 (UTC)