Talk:Gypsies

Problems with format and out-game content
This article isn't quite what I imaged when there was to be a "Gypsies" article. These are the areas I think need attention: AngusM 17:22, October 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Put out-game content at the end: it isn't policy that out-game content should be at the end of an article which is in-game-based (but I think it'd be a good one) however, it is highly precedented. For that reason I think "The real world Romani" section should not be the first, but one of the last. I also think that should go in the guide.
 * 2) Less victimization: roughly half the above-mentioned content seems to deal with victimization of the Romani. This leads me to perceive that half their identity is based on their victimization. I think it would be sufficient to dedicate no more than one sentence to pointing out that they have been persecuted, misunderstood, etc. and leave it at that.
 * 3) Antiziganism link unnecessary: in the spirit of 2., I don't think it's necessary to have an external link directly to an antiziganism article. Any readers who follow the other links should have no problem finding that stuff on their own, especially if they read that essay in the external links. Maybe that one should be removed instead.