Talk:Cut Material in Serpent Isle

Cleanup and Clarity
I don't quite understand the Monitor section, involving the Bane of Wantoness's designed on the animals. I'd clean it up, but risk changing the meaning. Someone who has the facts on hand should. I think the conclusion could stand a second look, too. AngusM 03:54, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Bigger Cities's dejustification
Plot_Cuts_in_Serpent_Isle starts off with "This is no plot cut" which screams "this section shouldn't even be here". If that section is no plot cut, then it shouldn't be in the article. If it should be in the article, it should be reworded. AngusM 17:16, June 15, 2010 (UTC)